The feedback that I had received was that in my genre model I relied to heavily on summary and not enough on my thoughts about the tv series (Ljah Dumo). For the craft essay, my feedback was to talk more about the rhetorical choices I used in genre model (Rosalind Guo). I was also suggested to include more sources that review and analyze the series (Jayden Le). Ljah and I were the only ones to present today. I told Ljah that he should try to implement more multimodal components like hyper links and a video. I also told him that he did a good job with his genre model and craft essay because I felt he did a good job overall. In my opinion there wasn't a lot to be fixed. I nominate Ljah Dumo, Rosalind Guo, and Jayden le for outstanding feedback today!