For Rosalind Guo I suggested that she move the analysis that she put in the genre model in the craft essay to help her not exceed the word limit. I also suggested that she explain her multimodal aspects a little more in her craft essay. For Xiaojun Tang, I suggested that he add more multimodal aspects in his genre model so that the reader can full understand the video games he is referencing, I nominate Rosalind Guo for outstanding feedback for extra credit.