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1.) I'm probably being repetitive with this phrase and need another word.

2.) I could be more direct with who is speaking, and limit the wordiness of the sentence.

3.) I think this was a pretty good quote.

4.) The way I led into my secondary source makes it seem like I am getting off topic.

5.) Describe what the philosophy is or use another word/words that represents this philosophy. Which philosophy am I talking about?

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