AP Final Draft

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Since the AP Final Draft was one of the last major compositions of the course, I was able to learn from the mistakes of my HCP to write a better paper. Compared to the HCP, I integrated my sources a lot better in this composition and made better use of evidence because it was a lot easier to discuss the evidence and experts as it relates to the policies that I was promoting as possible solutions to the issue. However, I did continue to struggle in finding the kind of evidence I needed to support some of my claims but, overall, the clarity of my thesis and claims are better and the evidence and warrants I included were better integrated than those in the HCP.

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