Importance of Re-quoting

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Here I have a before and after picture of my second and final draft of the RA. Highlighted in green are claims that were changed by re-quoting some particular events that happened within the story. After receiving advice that re-quoting is especially useful to the reader to follow claims, I made some changes and the results made my RA stronger since I provided my reader with clarity on the subject and overall it was easier to read and follow.  

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