Rough Draft #1

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This was my first attempt at a draft for my AP. I had a difficult time transitioning between the CP and the AP going into this draft and it shows here. For much of this paper, I remember thinking I spent too much time discussing the actual nature of violent video games and why they were a problem, like the CP, rather than advocating for a particular solution. As such, I found it extremely difficult to cram everything I wanted to talk about into one essay without going exceedingly over the minimum word count. I also remember struggling with finding different multi-modal artifacts that could support my main claims.

This was another all-nighter assignment that was particularly grueling for me.

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