Rough Draft #2

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This is my second attempt at a rough draft for my AP project. I had a tough time trying to revise my first draft considering that I only got one peer review and I was already pushing the word count pretty high. I remember trying to think of different ways of how I could revise my paper but in the end, nothing substantial changed since I felt that all of the paragraphs within my draft served some sort of purpose. Still, I didn't want to hand in my first draft with nothing changed so I tried to create a broader discussion of my chosen solution within the last few paragraphs of my essay which, in hindsight, turned out to be very lazy.

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