With the final draft, came crunch time. Here is where I make the first significant improvement in my writing. Though this work was not perfect one of the highlights of this paper was that I learned how to research at a deeper level. Before I would ask a question and research the answer to it. Now I am capable of asking follow-on question that push the research past the surface level. Another highlight would be my my ability to comprehend rhetoric. My ability to organize and choose evidence in order to be more persuasive  has seen great improvement. An example of this would be the reference I made to the Virginia tech massacre as a consequence of the lack information in the NICS.

Some of the noticeable flaws in this paper would that I have many sentence level issues, and continue to be repetitive. Also there also parts of argument unclear, such as how I mention the NRA as the face of the opposition without providing any previous context.