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This is the Rough Draft of Assignment #2

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Step 1

  1. A memorable movie. Venom 2. The first movie that I watched all by myself.
  2. A memorable concert. Richard Clayderman’s Piano performance. The first concert that I have ever attended.
  3. A memorable moment from my childhood. Playing with my dog in the backyard

 

Step 2

1) Interviewing a peer partner (from this class)

Amber’s memorable moment from childhood: 2007, it was the Mid Autumn Festival, that day left Amber with negative memories and effects. She fell off the stairs, although she didn’t get hurt, but her character changed-- she is not as talkative as she was before. 

3) Interviewing a friend

My friend’s memorable movie: Bruce Almighty. It was memorable because the plot is well set with rich imagination.

Step 3

  1. The Zen of Housework.
  2. “I can see thousands of droplets of steam-- each a tiny spectrum-- rising from my goblet of grey wine” (Writing and Knowing, p20). This sentence just creates a special advanced tone, making me feel like the author adds a “rich” and elegant filter on the poem. Furthermore, it creates vivid images of the scene. 

 

  1. The House on Mango Street
  2. It’s small and red with tight steps in front and windows so small you’d think they are holding their breath (Cisnero, 4). I like this sentence because it creates perfect images with very interesting personification.

 

  1. Me Talk Pretty One Day
  2. “If you have not meimslsxp or lgpdmurct by this time, then you should not be in this room” (Sedaris, p167). Sedaris makes up a few words, the creativity lead to a lot of effects on readers.

 

  1. The Zen of Housework.
  2. “like a school of playful fish, or like the sheer curtain” (Writing and Knowing, 20). I like this sentence because it uses two similes to portray the droplets which creates images and imaginations visually. 

 

  1. The House on Mango Street
  2. “Before that we lived on Loomis on the third floor, and before that we lived on Keeler. Before Keeler it was Paulina, and before that I can’t remember (Cisnero, p3). The repetition here shows how tiring and exhausting the character felt about moving around by sucking energy down. 
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