As mentioned in my Reflective Introduction, I am very thankful to receive comments and feedback on my CP and AP. I struggled writing both projects and any comments were much appreciated! 

Thank you to Professor Huang, Professor Cibula, my two in-class peer reviewers, and the Writing Center tutors! 

Some names have been redacted.

Figure 1. Feedback from Professor Huang on CP.

Figure 2. Feedback from Professor Cibula on AP Drafts #1 & #2.

Figure 3. Feedback from Peer Review on AP Draft #2.