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Aside from my professor, I also had friends read my papers, especially the CP. One awesome thing about having friends who are humanities majors is that you can demand them to read your work.

Here is a composition of feedback to my work as it kept progressing from start to finish!

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As you can see, my friends were always so supportive of my work.

Jokes aside, they were genuinely a big part of the composition of the CP. Unfortunately, I didn't get many screenshots/photos because I wasn't aware of this portion of the ePortfolio at the time but here are some of the highlights I found.

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There was a lot of back and forth between my friends on my work and opinions on what I had to say, but ultimately they were such a big help.

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For the first essay, the comments that my professor had left were super helpful and redirected me into writing a significantly better essay.

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Towards the end of my revisions for the CP, I even got the same friend who called my essay "garbage" to compliment me!

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