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AP Revision Draft

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My revision draft took Justin's comments (mostly formatting suggestions for MLA) for the AP first draft, but also comments that praised certain aspects of the work that allowed me to know which sections to keep (like why Southern Californians should care about the Aswan Dam in Egypt).

Below is a screenshot of the AP Revision Draft title (Page 1). I changed it before the AP Final Draft to remove the pun and include more aspects of my thesis (like the "status-quo" solutions), and my attempt to relate the Aswan's issues to California and its ongoing concerns with the Hoover Dam.

Below is a screenshot of the AP Revision Draft, Figure 4, Page 10. I did not discuss this image in detail and it did not quite complement my argument of status-quo solutions so I removed it before the final draft.

Below is the PDF file of my Revision Draft.

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Using an ePortfolio

Introduction
ePortfolios are a place to demonstrate your work. They are made of sections and pages. The list of sections are along the left side of the window (show me). Each section can have multiple pages, shown on the right side of the window (show me).
Portfolio Sections

Sections are listed along the left side of the window (show me). Each section can have multiple pages inside of it. To organize or edit a section, click the .

You can rename any section by clicking "Rename", rearrange sections by clicking "Move To...", or delete sections by clicking "Delete" in the popup menu.
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Sections have multiple pages. You can see the list of pages for the current section on the right side of the window (show me). To organize or edit a page, click the .

You can rename any section by clicking "Rename", rearrange sections by clicking "Move To...", or delete sections by clicking "Delete" in the popup menu.
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The content you see on a page is the same content any visitors will see. To edit this content, click the " Edit This Page" link (show me) and the page will change to editing mode.
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Content is divided into subsections, which each have a dotted border. You can delete or edit the contents of a subsection by clicking the or icons at the top right corner of the subsection.

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