Revision Plan

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During the revision process of the AP, I noticed that there were a lot less mistakes that I needed to fix which meant that my writing was improving even more. One issue that I have been continuously struggling with was the structure and organization of my paper but after the conference with Dr. Way, I was able to understand how to organize the beginning of the paper so that the thesis and claims were clear. Compared to the HCP Revision Plan, this AP Revision Plan seems to have less revision annotations, meaning I have been learning from the mistakes in the HCP and am improving in constructing my thesis and claims.

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