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During the peer review process, I was assigned to the "Seascapes and Waterways" peer review group. My peer review feedback partner was Justin Cerda, who was working on a similar topic on the Los Angeles River. Professor Obodiac recommended we pair up because our topics were quite similar as both of our topics are about rivers. 

Below are screenshots of Justin's comments on my work, and my comments on his work. He recommended me to work on the little things like MLA formatting, and said that I made great use of visuals. 

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Below are my comments to Justin's essay on the Los Angeles river. I appreciated his simply yet effective writing style. It goes to show that clarity of language helps in conveying clarity of purpose to the audience. 

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