Welcome to the "Red Wind" Reflection

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I decided to reflect on my video embeddingrating system, first sentence, and the conciseness of paragraphs.

 My video embedding was effective in maintaining the attention of the audience while the rating system established credibility, which is also appealing to the audience.

Being concise within my paragraphs allowed my review to be straight-forward, which is a repeating pattern among successful online film review websites.

My first sentence lacked emotional appeal and was not very effective in attracting an audience.

 

 Below is my "Red Wind" online movie review:

 

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