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Here is the first sentence of my review:

 "Raymond Chandler's "Red Wind" fits the description of a film that pushes the boundaries between classic noir and neo-noir."

A solid first sentence in a review will catch the readers attention and should influence them to keep reading. It is (arguably) the most important line in a review. My first sentence is very weak in its emotional appeal to the audience. It does not capture the reader's interest nor does it give any indication of the quality of the movie. Some people visit websites frequently because of their ability to tell them about something very quickly. I do not do this, therefore less people would want to read my review. It can thus be concluded that my first sentence does not succeed in attracting an audience.

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