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My plans for revising my essay are to integrate more telling, edit the sentence structure and flow of the paper. I would like to tell more about the sadness and chaos and further the ideal.
My last experience with a thesis driven academic essay was in the fall quarter, and was about feminism. In particular, biopower. Even though it was timed, i felt that i did very good on that essay.
My greatest weakness is not making a strong enough thesis statement. I am successful at making my point in the supporting paragraphs, but not at the strong thesis statement.
I would like to work on thesis statements, because I always restate the question and don’t make a strong enough thesis that hooks the reader.

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ePortfolios are a place to demonstrate your work. They are made of sections and pages. The list of sections are along the left side of the window (show me). Each section can have multiple pages, shown on the right side of the window (show me).
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You can rename any section by clicking on the icon that appears, rearrange sections by clicking and dragging them, or delete sections by clicking the icon.
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