Imitation Exercises

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Our first imitation exercise was to take sentences from our first draft, and use the passages we previously annotated to heighten them and create a better experience. I took 3 sentences from my first draft an added descriptive words to give the essay more depth. 

 

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Our second Imitation Exercise was to simply revise two paragraphs and incorporate the annotations we said we would try in the first draft of our "Taste Memories" essay! 

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