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My process of revision begins with looking over all peer and instructor reviews. I look over all the edits made on the document, as well as their comments on the side, and then I make a list of things I need to look over or change. Revision helps when generating new thoughts because it provides feedback from the audience. Through their comments, I am able to see where my essay is lacking in information or where it requires clarification. I found that the instructor reviewsLinks to an external site. helped me ensure completion. Not only did it point out missing information, but it also guided me towards sections of my essay that required more attention. I found the instructor’s feedback to be the most helpful because it gave me a clear sense of what I should revise. Peer reviewsLinks to an external site., in comparison to the instructor’s review, focused mainly on the issue I discussed. It was interesting to read through comments made by other people because it made me realize where I needed to clarify information. As the reader, they provided details about where they were confused on the issue and questions or comments that may need to be addressed. Having multiple perspectives on the issue and my writing helped ensure I provided as much detail in my argument as possible. All the criticism I received was constructive, so I did not have any issues with anything my peers had to say. However, I think that in the end it is up to the writer to make any revisions to their draft. I looked over and considered all the suggestions that were made, but I did have a couple discrepancies that led me to leave a few details unchanged. As a critic myself, I try to leave comments that I believe can be helpful. I always clarify that my comments are mere suggestions for them to consider and not requirements. I believe that everyone has a different style when it comes to writing, so you can’t expect everyone to write the way you would. In the end, I want to become a critic that provides suitable tips based on their unique writing style and provide insight, as the audience, that will only help them strengthen their argumentation.

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