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"Connect the points between the characteristics of the Suburban Gothic and your music playlist"      -Classmate

Following this advice, I decided to elaborate more on the specific themes of my songs chosen and how they relate to the stories we read in class. Also, I decided to add connections like Connie's lack of judgment based on how she was being treated at home with the song Daddy Issues. 

 

"Add more detail in the introduction and make the thesis clearer for the audience" -Classmate

With this essay the introduction was one of the hardest parts for me to write because I didn't know how to make the music playlist genre model and the Suburban Gothic flow. My thesis was having a hard time letting the readers know what this essay was going to be about but hopefully in my final draft the thesis is clear.

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