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During the peer review process, I was assigned to the "Seascapes and Waterways" peer review group. My peer review feedback partner was Justin Cerda, who was working on a similar topic on the Los Angeles River. Professor Obodiac recommended we pair up because our topics were quite similar as both of our topics are about rivers. 

Below are screenshots of Justin's comments on my work. He recommended I to work on the little things like MLA formatting and said that I made great use of citations and urging Southern Californians to care more. 

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Below are my comments to Justin's work. I told him that he did a great job with MLA formatting, but he should work on the structure of his essay and the theoretical underpinnings of his argument. For example, I recommended he expand on his gentrification laws by adding cross-comparative analysis with other similar rivers in the United States that have had successful gentrification reform. 

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