HCP Draft #2

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In this second draft, I was still missing research and a counter-argument. I had to add more images and caption them correctly. I still had a lot of work to do in this rough draft considering I did not any new content that was beneficial to my paper. I looked at Annie's comments so that I could do the final edits. She basically told me the same thing I had to change from my first draft. At this point I was still having trouble with researching and adding images. 

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Please see the document for in-text comments. You need to research and present the counter-argument. Too few images and the images that are there are not captioned or integrated into the text. See my comments for other info. Good job keep going.
Anne Elizabeth Yaniga, Jan 31 at 4:45pm

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