The Drafts

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For my first draft I was very excited to just start writing  I may have been overly excited because I missed a vital detail in the prompt.I had expanded way more than necessary and included outside sources that I was not to touch. I worked on integrating those sources to prove the stereotypes false claims. 

First Draft - The Who Are They, and the WHAT They’re Wrong About

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After realizing the wrong I committed in the first draft, I had to almost completely rewrite the second draft, removing outside sources sticking to my own stories, and then including evidence form the model text we looked at.

 

Second Draft - The HOW and WHY They’re Wrong Draft

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