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"There is no thesis on the first draft" -Classmate 

In my first draft I completely forgot to add a thesis to my introduction. When doing the peer reviews, I noticed my readers were not introduced to what the essay was going to be about. 

 

 

"There is no introduction of IT in the introduction" -Classmate

In my introduction the Suburban Gothic genre was introduced but not the main topic about IT being a representation of this genre. In my second draft I added IT into my thesis for my readers to understand what the essay was going to be about. 

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