AP Draft 1 Reflection

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     So far in revising my AP Prospectus into my first draft, I feel like I am making steady progress but there is still a lot more I need to add to my paper. I have a lot to expand in the solutions such as the supporting evidence and the counterarguments/rebuttals. I know some of the arguments that go along with my solution, but I am having trouble finding specific experts that argue against the particular solution. I am able to find general arguments about education and immigration, but I haven't seen any arguments that are specific to the solution about EL programs and special visas. Most of the arguments that I have come across are from think tanks, and I would like to use information that comes from other sources to add variety to my paper.

    Overall, I still need to do a lot more research in order to make my paper strong. Right now it's very plain and needs a lot more supporting evidence to show that these solutions could actually work. I have expanded solution one and still need to work on it and expand solution 2. My paper is still very superficial  and needs a lot more work to get it to where I would like it to be.

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