Emails and Meetings with my Professor

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In the email about feedback for my rough draft,

This is great work, but I would give it a 91, because you should go into more detail about your poster and

how it symbolizes your message. I can meet tomorrow, are you free?

I became confused on how I should go into more detail given that I had already stated the problem, made

necessary adjustment to improve persuasiveness, and provided many solutions to my problem. So I quickly

scheduled a meeting with my professor to ask him to elaborate on that topic. In the meeting I was enlightened

about the issue he stated, I misunderstood what he meant in the email and made careless assumptions. The

problem in my work is that even though I did make a good analysis of the message and had claims supported by

secondary sources, I wasn't referencing the claims back to my poster and platform. This made it so that my

claims were just simply related to the real world but has nothing to do with the poster I created. Upon realizing

my mistake, I swiftly integrated the references I was missing into the essay. Furthermore, I also touched upon

the technique used in my project as part of my analysis.

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