This was my first college paper that I wrote. I wasn't surprised that there were things that still needed to do to make this paper better. After going to office hours and talking with the professor, I found out what I needed to do to fix in my next paper. The feedback was that I need to add more of my own thoughts in the paper. I realized a lot on the claims from the class discussions. This was what I feel I struggled with the most when writing this paper. I also struggled with using academic writing. I used first person instead of third person in my paper. Since this was an academic paper I should've stayed away from words like I, you, we, etc.