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This draft had a lowered word limit which made it easier to start the Genre Analysis. In green are what I chose to keep in the final draft. In orange are changes that I will or needed to make in the draft, and in red are the parts of the essay that I chose to not include in the final draft. This draft was a good step in the right direction. There was still some corrections that should've been fixed. 

 

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