Strengths: - Strong use of suburban gothic conventions in thesis - Great job connecting Arnold Friend to the definition of liminal characters, as your secondary source - Strong argument when you state suburban gothic addresses the struggles women face that other forms of literature and history overall has failed to do Weaknesses: - Missing from thesis: What fears and anxieties do these suburban gothic conventions enlist in certain groups (Ex. women). However, these are stated in your paper, make sure to include them in your thesis, to ensure your argument is clear - Use third person - Consider combining paragraphs, too many can make your paper appear unclear Overall Statement: Hello Danielle! Overall, your arguments and secondary sources connect very well together. I believe editing your thesis to have a clearer argument, will serve in your best interest because right now it is too open-ended, and it is hard to see what specific ideas your paper is going to address. Keep up the good work!

Overall a very specific analysis of the article "where are you going where have you been". Some of the sentences is hard to understand, maybe you can use the method of reading by others behind you. And there are also two scholar articles are used which is perfect. Keep on working!